Twinkle Twinkle Little Flame
Diary entry number 12, Hi my name is Ivy. My dad is a inventor.
He made a wonderful thing for candles because we we’re in France
and France is the place for building magic. We couldn't use candles outside
at night because they would blow out so we could only use them inside.
But dad said we should be able to take the candles outside. So then dad
thought that he could make a cover for the candles. He tried a plastic bag
but that only set on fire. So he tried and tried but nothing worked so he went
to bed. I woke up and me and my brother Gorgie. went to his work shop and
tried to help but nothing worked. So mum came in and said why don't you use
glass. dad said that was a great idea. I said and use metal for the out line. Dad
said you can test it tonight we were so excited that we were in our dads workshop
all day until sun down. well we watched dad make the thing. It was a colored glass
with black metal to out line it. It was the best thing that he had made. It was finally
dark and we put on our gloves, hat, scarves and coat on and went outside. We lit
the candle and walked down the street and it hit me I know what to call this and it
called a lantern. French from Latin meaning "lamp, torch. and thats the story.
I really like your idea for this Quick Write, Isla. It sounds like it could be a true story!
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