🍃Dusk🍃
She’s skinny like a small tree trunk and dark
Her hand is as soft as a carpet on the back of your leg
Her breath smells like licorice
Eyes soft and blue like the sky
She moves as quick as a ninja
Carrying a bag full of sadness
A voice softly calls “come closer”
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hey isla i love what you write good job
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ReplyDeleteWow this is a moving piece of writing. You have used some really amazing descriptive words, next time you post on your blog, make sure you double check your writing and spelling to make sure you fix the punctuation. You have done so well and you should be proud of yourself.
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thanks Isla I still teaching myself where to put my punctuation.
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